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[Fiction Review] “The Witch Who Trades with Death” by C M Alongi

Full Title: The Witch Who Trades with Death
Author: C M Alongi
Published: March 11, 2025 by Angry Robot
Genres: Fiction, Fantasy, Epic Fantasy, Action & Adventure, LGBTQ+
Edition Details: 384 pages, hardcover (my copy was 488 pages, paperback)
Source: ARC – Requested directly
Rating: {5/5 stars}

First Glance

I followed this author on TikTok ages ago for her CaFae Latte skits, long before I realized she had published anything. When this book was described, I found myself intrigued by this potential twist on a story where Death is a character. I even wondered if it’d be written along the lines of a Persephone retelling, where the witch would fall in love with Death himself… but regardless, the description of a witch having to make deals with Death to survive had me jump at the opportunity to apply for an ARC.

Themes listed: trauma and overcoming it; fear vs courage; refugees; racism & xenophobia; toxic vs healthy relationship; found family & the power of friendship.

Content Warnings listed: graphic violence; sexual abuse; death; self-harm.

Positive Bits

Right off the bat, I’m in awe of how well Alongi handled all of the heavy topics listed for this story. As a survivor of sexual abuse, I was prepared to be made uncomfortable as we followed the story of an unwilling concubine. It implies certain experiences have to occur. While we do bear witness to abuse at the hands of the Emperor, it’s written with such nuance that we don’t have to experience it directly to recognize and hold its weight. The level of writing craft that went into this story will have me re-reading it for tips on how to do the same in my own work.

One of my favorite characters in this story is an old whore from a brothel with a no nonsense attitude and a twinkle in her eye. Sex work is treated as a completely valid and even borderline respected industry in the culture of our witch Khana’s new refuge. Similarly, all forms of representation are handled as vitally normal within the story. We see sign language used by someone with an injured throat, an amputee with a prosthetic leg, and a wide range of ability or disability among warriors in their village. We see a variety of relationships, including a hilarious request by a woman’s mother that she provide grandchildren with her AFAB nonbinary partner by either finding a third or adopting (she’s not picky). All in all, it was the way all of these diverse and unique characters were woven in as natural to the world they exist in that made the representation feel authentic instead of tokenized.

I appreciate closure in a story, especially if there’s a clear Bad Guy and Good Guy in the situation. Without getting too into the weeds or providing spoilers, I can say that the end of the story left me satisfied. There weren’t any frustrating loose ends or unanswered questions, and Khana got to grow into herself as both a witch and a person. The emphasis on found family and community made me teary eyed in the best possible way! All in all, this book full of heavy topics is surprisingly uplifting (at least to me) and left me in a good mood once I finished it.

Less Enjoyable Bits

I want more, but that’s the epic fantasy reader in me. Even if we’ve reached the end of the current problem, there are still bad people doing bad things out there. I would be very happy to hear Alongi say she’s planning another book in this world, even if it has nothing to do with Khana’s story.

There’s a fine line for those with trauma when it comes to reading about someone else’s. While I thought the balance in this story was perfect and didn’t trigger me, I could see it being a difficult read for someone with fresher wounds (especially anyone who has experienced domestic violence or sexual abuse). Go into this story expecting it to be hard in some places, but know that healing is part of their experiences as well. I trusted Alongi’s writing to handle the topics as well as her skits do on TikTok, and that trust was well placed. I just urge caution.

Is it weird to say I wanted more Death? While Death plays a vital role as a character and even gains a personality as we watch interactions between Death and Khanna, I found myself wanting to see more of those moments. We’re given enough to understand Death as a being with specific rules and attitudes, but that’s it. None of Death’s decisions or actions surprised me, but I still felt like I was missing something from them. Then again, I have a deep love for Death as a major character in stories, so this might just be a me thing.

Tidbits Worth Repeating

She didn’t truly believe in gods. And if they were real, they have ignored her prayers and those of all the other concubines. If they existed: she hated them. And yet, desperate times…

How did we get from me teasing you about your obvious crush to you both making me feel feelings? I’m outnumbered. This is unfair.

There was a place for her here. People who cared about her and who she cared about in turn. A future of joy and contentment and maybe some tragedy, but also healing and love. She was home.

Is it worth the coin?

Yes – I had planned to buy this book before asking for the ARC, so I already thought so. Now? Heck yeah, it’s an amazing piece of writing craft and a great story to boot!

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[Fiction Review] “The Name-Bearer” by Natalia Hernandez

Full Title: The Name-Bearer: Flowers of Prophecy Book 1
Author: Natalia Hernandez
Published: October 11, 2022 by Amazon Publishing (KDP)
Genres: Fiction, Young Adult, Fantasy, LGBTQ+, Hispanic & Latino American Literature
Edition Details: 296 pages, ebook
Source: Purchased
Rating: {4/5 stars}

This is a spoiler-free review. No details will be shared from the storyline itself that aren’t available or inferred from the book jacket and online descriptions.

First Glance

I remember when I first ran across this author on TikTok (@NataliaHernandezAuthor), long before her books came into being. She had just experienced a wild dream, one with flowers that named the royals as they were born.

I’m so happy she decided to take that idea and run with it! I picked up this book when I was lucky enough to do so for free during a sale.

Positive Bits

This world is unique and interesting as we explore it via the main character’s life. The author used Guatemalan culture and mythology to color her worldbuilding, and it comes through as rich and beautiful descriptions of the people and locales of the story. The bits of Spanish woven in have their meanings generally spelled out or clear within context, whether you would choose to look up their translations or not. You don’t have to speak the language to enjoy the story, while it enriches the world by reminding us of the source inspirations.

The plot of this story is what originally drew me in, and it doesn’t disappoint. I can’t get into specifics without spoilers, but overall the Name-Bearer weaves in friendship and romance as subplots that fit into the bigger story being told. I also appreciate that she explains the meanings of names (as knowing them has been part of her training). As a writer, I know how much thought you can put into the meaning behind names… and this seems like the perfect plot-appropriate way to share those meanings with the reader. And in a world where magical Flowers name the royals, it makes sense that people would be more selective and purposeful in naming their children as a whole.

I think the setup for Book 2 has been done well, as far as hints dropped within Book 1. I’ll only know for sure when I read Book 2 down the road, but it seems like important characters are given their own goals and reasons to continue being part of the story. I have theories…

Less Enjoyable Bits

As a queer polyamorous person, I’m fiending for clarity on the romance front. I knew to expect a female romantic interest, but there are layers to the Name-Bearer’s experience that leave me wondering if there’s going to be a choice in the future. I’d love to see a “why choose” style situation instead, but I’m biased! Mostly, the romantic options seem a little too ill-defined as we meet Person 1, Person 2, and what appears to be Person 3. I was left trying to track where the romance was heading, and it disappointed me.

This book is written to cover about a decade of the Name-Bearer’s life in one story. This isn’t a spoiler so much as a warning. I started reading the 13 year old girl’s story with the expectation that the first chapter was a prologue… only to discover that we would follow her life between the moment of the Flowers refusing to name the Prince to adulthood. If you don’t like time jumps or struggle to stay on track, consider this a warning.

While I enjoyed this book and didn’t put it down unless required (for work or parenting duties), the style is something that didn’t connect for me personally. The format of the story reminds me of listening to a storyteller or reading a screenplay. Descriptions of scenes and the locations they occurred in were extremely detailed, but the actions of the characters themselves were often described to the reader rather than shown on the page. For example, the Name-Bearer could ask someone where they came from, and that person would then have a paragraph along the lines of “he proceeded to describe his childhood, here are the details he shared”. With how elaborate the scene setting was written, it left me yearning for the characters’ voices rather than a summary of what they said.

Tidbits Worth Repeating

For the goddess Danray is the goddess of both battle and transition. That is why both the butterfly and the phoenix are so prevalent in Danrayen culture. They are both creatures undone to become something more than they once were.

Is it worth the coin?

Yes – if this sounds like your cup of tea or ran across your FYP at some point before it was written, consider picking it up. Book 2 is coming out at the end of June 2023, so you won’t have to wait long to continue the story.

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[Fiction Review] “Can’t Spell Treason Without Tea” by Rebecca Thorne

Full Title: Can’t Spell Treason Without Tea: A Cozy Fantasy Steeped with Love (Tomes & Tea Cozy Fantasies #1)
Author: Rebecca Thorne
Published: September 15, 2022 by self-publishing
Genres: Fiction, Cozy Fantasy, LGBTQ+ Romance, LGBTQ+ Fantasy
Edition Details: ebook
Source: Purchased
Rating: {5/5 stars}

This is a spoiler-free review. No details will be shared from the storyline itself that aren’t available or inferred from the book jacket and online descriptions.

First Glance

As I stated in my review of A Pirate’s Life for Tea, I read the two books of this series out of order on purpose. I wanted to see if Book 2 could be read as a stand alone (it can), but then I needed to know how it all started.

Positive Bits

I think I’ve found a romance trope or plot that I prefer above all others: the pre-existing relationship! We start the story with Kianthe and Reyna already being a couple, and we follow the changes (and challenges) of their relationship in this book rather than watching a new romance blossom. To each their own, but I deeply enjoyed having a story that started with a couple making choices to deepen their relationship.

My understanding of our main couple in Book 2 fit who they were in Book 1. Knowing they end up alive and well by the end of the story, it was still nice to see where some of the plot points originated here. The stakes in this book seemed higher, but this *is* a cozy fantasy… so no one was maimed in the making of this story.

Without ruining anything, I can say that I enjoyed the tension of this story largely living outside of the relationship. It gives a healthy taste of “us against the world” for Kianthe and Reyna, and we get to celebrate their successes (and share their failures). The side characters are given enough depth to feel like more than props for the main characters to act upon/around.

Less Enjoyable Bits

I’m dying to know more about the two powerful forces we hear about in this series over and over. The murderous queen from the book blurb feels like a Disney villain, and I prefer the kind of villains that make you question which side is right. We just don’t know enough about her (yet?) to understand her motives.

The same can be said about the Magicary, which is a nebulous location full of mages found *somewhere over there* and not used as an active location for the story. There’s enough information to hint that the elders there are stuffy old mages, but I’m left wanting to know far more about the place. How do you end up there for training? How many people are mages in this world? How many different kinds of magic are there? I feel like I’m missing out on interesting stuff hidden in the Magicary’s walls, especially as we meet someone else who attended there with Kianthe.

My only other complaint is that a couple who ends up together by Book 2 isn’t really brought together by the end of Book 1. We get to find out they like one another (begrudgingly), and they start to grow close due to events requiring them to work together… but then they’re together in Book 2, as far as I recall. They’re another fun side couple, so I’m disappointed they didn’t get a chance for an “on screen” heart-to-heart in this story.

Tidbits Worth Repeating

I had to dig for quotes that don’t spill the beans…

You know I wouldn’t choose someone for their coin. I love you because you’re amazing. You find worth in me, not my title or magic… No one else sees past that. Ever.

How in every hell did I fall in love with someone so intelligent, and somehow so, so stupid?

Is it worth the coin?

Yes – Rebecca Thorne’s cozy fantasy novels are fun and heartfelt. They have queer representation all around, great communication between romantic partners, and lots of jokes to lighten the mood.

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[Fiction Review] “This Gilded Abyss” by Rebecca Thorne

Full Title: This Gilded Abyss
Author: Rebecca Thorne
Published: June 6, 2023 by self-publishing
Genres: Fiction, LGBTQ+ Horror, LGBTQ+ Fantasy
Edition Details: 287 pages, ebook
Source: ARC – requested directly from author
Rating: {5/5 stars}

This is a spoiler-free review. No details will be shared from the storyline itself that aren’t available or inferred from the book jacket and online descriptions.

First Glance

I thoroughly enjoyed Thorne’s writing style in her cozy fantasy novels, but I’m glad she decided to try a different genre here. I like a variety of genres, and cozy fantasy limits you on the amount of action and trouble the characters can get into.

There’s a detailed list of content warnings for the book, and I believe they cover all of the topics you might find triggering.

Positive Bits

This story handles worldbuilding with a deft hand, keeping us from drowning in details but also providing enough information for us to come along for the ride. Anytime I found myself curious about a royal title or a historical reference mentioned, it was explained just pages later for us.

The enemies to lovers relationship between Nix and Kess (referenced in the description) feels authentic. The reason they fell apart in the past makes sense, allowing us to experience Nix’s hurt and grief as well as her processing of those emotions. I find many romance plots lean on misunderstandings in a way that feels silly or frustrating, but Thorne made their conflict feel real and important. We get to watch the tension of the main plot and the romance grind forward in ways that can’t be ignored.

In the intro of the book, Thorne left a note for her mother that there was spice in Chapter 23. This is true, but I wanted to make note for those who aren’t as interested in spicy stories. The intimacy between Nix and Kess isn’t just spice – it’s so well done! It feels necessary to the plot, showing us their connection and using their actions (spicy and not) to show us how they’re feeling.

Less Enjoyable Bits

I don’t like cliffhangers! The story ends without resolving the major problems at hand (at least a few of them), and we’re not safe and sound when the last page turns. I’m eager for book 2 in 2024, but I’ll admit I often avoid series of books for this reason.

Without ruining any plot points, there are details about the world’s conflicts (war, different countries, etc) that I just didn’t get enough information about yet. This plays a large role toward one of the main plot points, and it’s largely on purpose as a device to build tension. I enjoy more info dumping than most people, though, so perhaps this is just a me thing.

Tidbits Worth Repeating

Not yet, little speck.

Is it worth the coin?

Yes – Rebecca Thorne’s book is fast-paced and imaginative. Assuming none of the content warnings are huge red flags for you, I think this book is a fun ride worth taking.

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[Fiction Review] “A Pirate’s Life for Tea” by Rebecca Thorne

Full Title: A Pirate’s Life for Tea (Tomes & Tea Cozy Fantasies #2)
Author: Rebecca Thorne
Published: February 23, 2023 by self-publishing
Genres: Fiction, Cozy Fantasy, LGBTQ+ Romance, LGBTQ+ Fantasy
Edition Details: ebook
Source: ARC – requested directly from author
Rating: {5/5 stars}

This is a spoiler-free review. No details will be shared from the storyline itself that aren’t available or inferred from the book jacket and online descriptions.

First Glance

This book can be read without first reading Can’t Spell Treason with Tea. I requested a copy of this book when Thorne mentioned on TikTok that she wanted readers who hadn’t read book one yet.

My only awareness of this series before reading book two was that it included [1] lesbians, [2] magic, and [3] tea.

Positive Bits

I have a soft spot for cozy fantasy and fluff fiction. In a world that’s so chaotic and overwhelmingly bad at times, having guaranteed happily ever afters is more important than ever.

This book is an interesting outsider’s view of a romance as it blooms. The main characters from book one, Kianthe and Reyna, switch back and forth in perspectives as they watch two other women fall in love. You know how it feels when you read a corny romance book and wrinkle your nose at something silly the characters have done? Kianthe and Reyna join the reader in reacting to the antics of Bobbie and Serina. And if you love puns, you’ll definitely love Kianthe…

The plot kept me interested outside of the “relation-shipwreck” (ha!) as we dig into a regional lord and his questionable activities. There were plenty of tie-ins to the first book that were detailed enough to avoid confusion but vague enough to make me want book one ASAP. The dragon eggs mentioned in the book’s description played far less of a role than I expected, but there were hints as to why (both past and future) that might be the case. For those easily bored with too much cozy in their cozy fantasy, this book offers a bit of action and danger to spice things up. Given the genre, it’s obvious that no one dies or experiences traumatic loss (thank the gods!), but we have enough friction to keep the overarching plot relevant outside of the romance in progress.

Less Enjoyable Bits

My version of the book was an advanced copy, so there was still time to make adjustments when I read it. Thorne asked readers to reach out with any issues or comments, so I did. I won’t ruin any plot details, but I made a comment about a character introduction that was taken seriously (and positively). I know how hard and uncomfortable it can be to receive feedback on your work, so I appreciated her openness to discussion.

There’s a bit of a distance in observing the budding relationship between Bobbie and Serina that’s odd. I think this is largely in part to only experiencing their relationship as viewed by Kianthe and Reyna as outsiders. In a standard romance story, you’d get some of the internal dialogue from the romantic partners in addition to witnessing their interactions. The romance is still believable and acceptable as the story progresses, but I don’t know that I favor reading romance from a couple of steps away.

I almost wish this story had been a little less cozy! There are a couple of points where the tension is high enough to be more than a speedbump to the characters, but overall the main couple Kianthe and Reyna stayed almost too calm and happy the entire time. It didn’t hurt the plot, but it didn’t necessarily help either. It felt like maybe they were getting some downtime after book one being a bit spicier?

Tidbits Worth Repeating

My favorite quotes give away plot details, so I can’t include them. However, I loved this:

To the people who gave me one star reviews because the first book “had lesbians.” I doubled the lesbians in this one. Just for you. – Dedication

Is it worth the coin?

Yes – Rebecca Thorne’s book is cozy and funny and has lesbians AND pirates. What are you waiting for?

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[Fiction Review] “Black Sun” by Rebecca Roanhorse

Full Title: Black Sun (Between Earth and Sky #1)
Author: Rebecca Roanhorse
Published: October 2020 by Gallery / Saga Press
Genres: Fiction, Epic Fantasy, Historical Fantasy, Native American Literature, LGBTQ Fantasy
Edition Details: 464 pages, trade paperback
Source: Advanced Reader’s Edition won via Goodreads Giveaway
Rating: {5/5 stars}

This review is spoiler free. No details will be shared from the storyline itself that aren’t available or inferred from the book jacket and online descriptions.

First Glance

I enter giveaways on Goodreads if the book sounds like something I might read. In the case of this book, the description had me entering to win in the first sentence:

From the New York Times bestselling author of Star Wars: Resistance Reborn comes the first book in the Between Earth and Sky trilogy, inspired by the civilizations of the Pre-Columbian Americas and woven into a tale of celestial prophecies, political intrigue, and forbidden magic.

I’m a sucker for any story based in mythology, but I particularly enjoy magical worlds reimagining unfamiliar cultures. In her acknowledgements and credits at the end of the book, the author points out how often “epic fantasy” only seems to apply to European-flavored stories. I agree, which is why I often seek out those written in different lands.

Positive Bits

The world we’re brought into is beautiful and deadly. Isn’t that the best kind? We visit a land with a holy city run by Priests of the non-Christian variety, as well as wild seas and a crescent coast full of different peoples and cultures. Even without visiting some of the locations mentioned by characters, we’re given enough details to have a taste of their individual quirks. The worldbuilding was done skillfully enough that I never had a moment where I fell out of the story due to confusion over a custom or description.

As a queer woman, I greatly appreciated the fact that LGBTQ folks exist throughout the story without being the story. Representation is important, and I love a good queer-focused story as much as the next person, but the best kinds of representation are when being queer is treated the same as being short or tall – as in, it’s natural and a part of some characters’ stories without being the entirety of their plotline. Also, there’s a nonbinary person throughout this first book who uses the pronouns xe/xir, and I found that inclusion to be done skillfully enough to explain and then move us along to the actual reason xe was introduced.

Trilogies by their very nature have to end unfinished, but there’s a skill needed to leave us wanting more without leaving us at a confusing cliffhanger. This book handles that balance well, leaving us with just enough closure to be satisfied while maintaining enough loose threads to keep weaving the story in the next book. The specific characters who end up together at the end due to circumstance definitely had me wishing for more.

Less Enjoyable Bits

Sometimes, I find details I dislike that are important to the story. I think that might be the case here. For example, one character struggles with alcoholism or at least regularly uses alcohol to seek oblivion, and there’s a decent portion of the story where it’s not given context. It’s just a vice they have, and it gets them tossed in jail (to have them meet up with other important characters, of course). Much later, we learn a few details about their past that hint at why they drink so often, but it’s not particularly satisfying. Then again, maybe any family or personal experience with alcoholism or alcoholics makes this plotline hit different?

We’re given hints of each main character’s past, but sometimes it’s not balanced in the first book of a trilogy like this. While I became thoroughly invested in each of the characters as they came across the page, it disappointed me that we didn’t get more information on the Teek. Considering how their people and culture play into the first book’s story, I would’ve expected to hear more about them than a passing mention. The story in book one still makes sense without those details, but it might’ve been enriched with more of them included.

My only other complaint is on the magic system(s) used in this world. I enjoy fantasy worlds where magic is standard, especially if there are different kinds based on culture or class. That said, this book didn’t flesh out the magic existing in their society. We get hints here and there for plot purposes, but there’s never a really good explanation of what is and isn’t possible with magic (or how). Again, this might be a trilogy issue rather than an issue with this book directly. I can only wait and see in book two.

Tidbits Worth Repeating

She was only ten, then, her destiny far from decided. She had not yet learned that she was poor and that people like her only went to the celestial tower as servants, or that once you were poor, people hated you for it even when you weren’t poor anymore.

“Villain,” he mouthed, liking the sound of it, the weight of the word on his bloodied lip. If protecting his crows made him a villain, then a villain he would be.

Even when armed with blade and bow, even with an army of a thousand at her command, a spearmaiden’s greatest weapon is her tongue.

Is it worth the coin?

Yes – if you enjoy reading fantasy based in non-European cultures, this book is a great add to your collection. Also, the queer representation is woven throughout the story, so that’s a major bonus!